First Diamante Poem

                 Talha                

    Kind,Passionate

      Playing,Sleeping,Travelling

      Dream bigger,Do bigger

       Loving,Inspiring,Ignoring

       Jolly,Supportive,Tedious 

  Dismay




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  1. Incredible writing . Worth reading self expression

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  2. Fantastic depiction of yourself in the true sense of the word with such simplicity. Awesome work.

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  3. Very well written. Words describing a true personality.

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  4. Awesome! This defines your personality better than anything.

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  5. Wise use of words. Sensational writing. Highlighting every ounce of your personality.

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  6. Awesome! Excellent use of words Clearly defines your personality

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  7. More Intellectual than Shakespeare...Not Words But Spirit

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  8. It's all about expressing yourself and talha has nailed it with simple discerning words. Good work

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    1. The words used in poem clearly defines your personality

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  9. Nice choice of words.I've enjoyed the contrast, composition and rhythm of the poem. I really appreciate the message conveyed in the fourth verse. All in all it is a good effort.

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  10. Oh! very nice!!!!
    very cute pic
    Are you in NUST UNIVERSITY!

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